Simple and fun!
I love it.
There's something about it
I dont think you draw the best graphs, the story is not the smartest one and there's a few bits of weird animation but there's something about your job that i quite enjoy. I like the way the story is driven, your style is different and the way you deal with the music is quite good.
Good job, but i'd recommend you to try animating stronger stories.
Dark animation could be your thing
You know i'm always honest with my feedback so here it goes:
I love the concept. I can see lots of potential in this project. It grabs your attention and keeps you interested 'til the end. But I personally think the end was a bit rushed and it could be handled more into the pace of the rest of the movie. Good choice on the music, the script is good and in terms of style I love the dark feeling of the illustrations (wrapping up the story nicely).
Good work mate, good to see you're growing up in your style!
Ps. It would be good to see an updated version of this with all the little bits fixed.
On my mobile phone?
I love it. This is one of those games i definitely would put (and play) on my mobile phone. Simple, fun, addictive.. God job!
I gave you 7 on graphics 'cause I think the game looks slick but I think you could make a better job with the main menu and end screens. It would make the game far more attractive for the players.
Ps. You should create a mobile phone version of the game.
I dont spend that much time writing reviews for games. However i feel this one deserves to be pointed cause is just excelent. Everything has been taken care of in a very professional way, the menus, the graphics, the game itself. This is what NewGrounds is about, an oportunity for talented people to show what they are capable of. Congratulations.
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